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Hey, this is something my band's guitarist wrote. I'm posting it for him, because he's not allowed on this site anymore... XD

pay of all the privateers
what we started ends in tears
now its never known this way
see its just the word in page
never seen you crawl this way
check my watch what is today

please slip on my little coat
so lovely, can you scratch my throat?
never had the patience here
never had the muscle there
all we know is to be fair
check the reasons and your rhyme
all my limbs are in your hymn (pronounced hym in the song)

[Chorus]
noone ever fed to me! why wont you just let me be!
noone ever tought me see! its all predetermining !
Barr yourself you will refrain!
Never wanna see this place again!
Slip my jacket on my friend!

Curative Correct! x2
pay yourself in self respect! x2
[chorus]

alshymers is over me
my last fevers under me
check my time its far to long
didnt remember this all along
my old homes a touch of hope
wont remember who i wrote
their my puppet i wont pretend
ill meet you in the end

down the hall into the right
noone ever saw my light
carbon is a factor here
i will never believe there
twenty years in this old chair

[Chorus]
noone ever fed to me! why wont you just let me be!
noone ever tought me see! its all predetermining !
Barr yourself you will refrain!
Never see this place again!
Slip my jacket on my friend!

Curative Correction! x2
pay yourself in self poverty! x2
[chorus]

tippy, tippy see my scale
never wanna leave from here
cant wait till i leave from here
shoot me up with pretty hate
detox me with, my self to blame
never see the sun again,
wait until noon again
#2
It sounds pretty cool, i'm pretty sure it would sound even better to me in the context of the song.
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