wow. first time iv heard that song. so good! i really like it i need to learn this now
very good job dude, playing was clean as hell also liked the extra little bits of guitar lines peppered around the track.

Maybe my only suggestion would using less of an effect on the guitars (tremolo or chorus is it?)
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ah yeah, i had to turn the guitars up a few steps so i could sing it in my range, i was just too lazy to re-record the guitars higher :p i didn't raise the pitch on my voice though.

but thanks pplz!