#1
Ok, I finished this song 10 minutes ago and wrote it in about 15 minutes. I've been having bad depression lately and tried my only form of therapy, writing. I'm defenatly going to go back over it and revise it to the music, but give me some input if it seems deep.

P.S. It's not for an emo band, I'm just in a bad state as I said earlier and I write what's on my mind.

Verse 1:
A sorrow that sears though my soul
A pain that comes crushing down
I feel as though I am worthless
Not deserving to be in this world
I put on a mask to hide my emotions
I don't want anyone to see the real me
This horror I've become

Chorus:
Is anyone listening
Can anyone please help me
I cannot cry, I can not speak
Someone rescue me

Verse 2:
The though of suicide in my mind
Just so weak from fighting this
I feel like I've lost everything
I feel like I'm a tragedy within
The pain causing physical damage
Cannot sleep and cannot breath
While hiding the pain by damaging me

Bridge:
Just so tired of it all
I just want to be free of pain
Only hating on myself
Blaming everything upon me

Chorus:
Is anyone listening
Can anyone please help me
I cannot cry, I can not speak
Someone rescue me

Breakdown:
This demon has ahold of me
Controlling my mind and my strength
This demon has ahold of me
But I'm trying to break free

Chorus:
Is anyone listening
Can anyone please help me
I cannot cry, I can not speak
Someone rescue me
#2
very emotional, obviously a lot of feeling has been put into it, I like it. And try to stay happy mate, sounds cliched but things will get better
#3
i can feel that you are in a bad place, but, we can make it better ourselves, by doing stuff that make us feel good, writing down is good for getting things out, mayb you should listen to uplifting lyrics, and pull out some lyrics and mix them up, put happy thoughts around your home, there must be somethings you like, and something that makes you feel better x take care, keep writing, x