#1
i wanted to tell you
that i could see the sunset from out of my window
and over the rooftops
and down the roads when the cloud's not hanging too low

i wanted to tell you
that yesterday i saw a band play
and i danced like a lunatic, you would've been proud of me
all the other dancers took in a little piece of our philosophy

and i wanted to tell you
that i walked back in the streets at night time
and the trees looked beautiful tied up in blue fairy lights

i want to tell you
i remember that place
the way you wore your blue robes
and the look on your face
i remember your hands on my back
as you led me through the room
and how even with just that one touch
i felt at one with you

i don't want to tell you that i've been in the same old town
i've still been at school and i've been writing poems down
they're mostly about how that week away changed me
i know we never really spoke but something tells me
you know why i write them and know what they mean

and i want to tell you that i know if we met again
we'd have nothing to talk about because we'd always know what the other meant

i want to tell you
i remember that place
the way you wore your blue robes
and the look on your face
i remember your hands on my back
as you led me through the room
and how even with just that one touch
i felt at home with all of you



song.
just absorb it, i don't want criticism.
it's simple and sometimes cheesy and i don't care.
i'm posting to stop myself from posting anything stupid tonight.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
Last edited by DigUpHerBones at Jan 12, 2009,
#5
- "and i danced like a lunatic, you would've been proud of me
all the other dancers took in a little piece of our philosophy
"
- I love this.

I can't really give criticism to be honest. It holds it's own. Well done, doll face.