The sense of lazy melody in the vocals is pretty good, if pretty much a straight Nirvana rip off.

And for liking double kick so much your drummer really needs to get these things called fills figured out... Between the bass and guitar just playing follow-the-leader with eachother and the lack of real drum fills things are pretty uninteresting musically.

You've got a general sound figured out, now embellish it: flesh it out. And invest in some time in a professional studio, believe me, it's worth it.
Last edited by RadioMuse at Jan 13, 2009,