Most of it was pretty good, but "Into the Mouth of Hell" was hardly recognizable, and you murdered "Crazy Train"

"Plug in Baby" was played pretty good, you just need a tiny bit of work on playing it cleanly. Try slowing it down to 50 or even 25 percent and practice it over and over, and slowly work up to 100 percent. Even if you feel ridiculous playing that slow, it really helps.

Strumming pattern on "Basketcase" was a bit off

The Darkness was played well, but "The Trooper" was a bit sloppy

Just keep practicing, you'll be pro in no time

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=18128010#post18128010