#1
Standard Pop/Punk Rock Song

I Don't Need You Any More


And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more

There's nothing that I can do
The sun just wont shine for you
Were not coming together
But maybe its for the better
One and one make two
But this time it's not me and you

And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more

And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more

You could not try to sooth
The course of our love didn't run smooth
You come back, you come back for more
Though tonight I'll be locking my door
Hand in glove, you used to say
Overused, another cliché

And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more

And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more

Solo

And the record won't stop playing
Whilst the artists illustrating
Singing; I don't need you any more
I don't need you any more
#3
That was good! Not too sure how "while the artists illustrating" works, but it's your song. I really liked "there's nothing I can do, the sun just won't shine for you". Very nice lyrics. However, some of the lyrics I recognise from other songs, not saying you copied them so don't get me wrong.

"And the record won't stop playing..." - Paramore - Love sick melody
"One and one make two..." - Tenacious D - Tribute

Once again, I'm not saying you copied the lyrics, at the end of the day it's inspiration, I'm just saying others might accuse you.
And sorry if I used the title you wanted lol! I recently wrote a song called "I Don't Need You" lol, everything aside, nice work man, check out mine if you like thanks!