#1
Hello all, as of late I have been really getting into old school and alternative hip hop and this has crossed over into some of my songwriting. The track is called 1953, if you guys could let me know what ya think I could hit you guys back on your recordings or etc. I try to take a different lyrical take then most mainstream hip hop

All instruments recorded by me......

Its in my profile: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/GoodCharloteSux/
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
THAAAANK YOU GoodCharloteSux is god
Last edited by GoodCharloteSux at Jan 13, 2009,
#2
Gonna write as I listen.
So far, the rythm track is just slightly untight but groovy enough.
Sorry if it's not intended but the vocals are pretty humourous. It doesn't really matter though,I really love fun music. The lyrical influence from alternative hip hop is totally obvious. Since the only alt. rap group I have listened to is organized konfusion, I think that your lyrical theme is quite similar.

Very cool track, definatly enjoyed the music and the lyrics. You could improve on rythm though, it felt unsolid at alot of parts. Even though it's not a very serious song, you should put in just little more effort in making the vocals sound better.

With that fixed, I'd definatly buy (illegaly download) the track, and I only buy(illegaly download) good tracks.

C4C
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1045083
An even "unserious-er" track :P
#3
Unfortunately, I don;t have much vocal tone range. Its been a curse, I can;t sing very well and so I usually opt out and make instrumentals. The overtone of the song has a message but its definitely a fun song at heart. Thanks for the critque.
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
THAAAANK YOU GoodCharloteSux is god