#1
Just a hero
With no enemy
Has no purpose
In society
Just a genius
Who cannot read
Needs someone
who is willing to teach

just an arrow
With no archer
will go far
But can go farther
just a crossbow
Without a target
Will hit something
But nothing it aimed for

We need some help
We can’t do this by ourselves
we need a track to run
And a race to be won
alone we cannot hope
To say the things we know
But we’re running out of reasons
And we haven’t got much time
So assist us with or dreams
Or we’ll throw away our lives

Just a pilot
With no plane to fly
Is a sorry soul
Dreaming of the sky
Just a Poet
With no vocabulary
Cannot write much
About They’re deepest feelings

We need some help
We can’t do this by ourselves
we need a track to run
And a race to be won
alone we cannot hope
To say the things we know
But we’re running out of reasons
And we haven’t got much time
So assist us with or dreams
Or we’ll throw away our lives

Just a Child
with no role model
Will not grow up
To they’re full potential
Just a Role model
With no absent mind
Will not continue
To do the thing thats right

We need some help
We can’t do this by ourselves
we need a track to run
And a race to be won
alone we cannot hope
To say the things we know
But we’re running out of reasons
And we haven’t got much time
So assist us with or dreams
Or we’ll throw away our lives
Last edited by SpencerM94 at Jan 13, 2009,
#2
I think we all do here, especially in this forum called the pit
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#3
Nice! What genre of music is this intended for?

I like the contrasts (Hero/Enemy, Genius/can't read, Poet/No vocabulary)

Sounds very melancholic (sp?).
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Last edited by entity0009 at Jan 13, 2009,
#5
I don't like the bit about the crossbow, it ruined the flow a bit, the bit about the race that needs to be won was a nice metaphore, that was my fav. bit, it'll be good if you just reword that bit about the crossbow and it'll be cool