#1
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A distant cavalry inside my mind creates a living disease, walking the earth.
The estranged kind trapped in his mind can;t make a decision, to rip off the lid.
The baffled girl stick in his head had a problem leaving, to explore the world
The strongest empire couldn't survive your ranting, even on the thickest wire

[chorus]
Raping the image of our uncensored love with the lover's heart, the devils touch
Can't understand where i went wrong, i guess it's your own feelings, not what ive done.

A distant bell in my mind is ringing loud and clear, im on my way to hell
The best drug that i could slip to my mind cant do a thing, not even love
There is no face on the dollar bill, a simple decision to get the kill
A terrific chance in my mind is developing slowly, you had to bring me down

[chorus]
Cradling the image of our forgotten love, with the tightest grip, the devils touch
Cant understand where i went wrong, i guess you're just crying, at what youve done

The glamorous heart in my mind isnt real at all, it must have fell apart
solving the case inside my mind takes plenty skill, it can never be done

[chorus]
Enabling the image of our forgotten love, i cant hold on, with my devils touch
cant understand where i went wrong, i guess your just selfish, i did nothing wrong.

[outro]
A ****ed up caption underneath our love, you always hated me, with the devils touch


wrote this happily yesterday.

c4c
Call me Sean
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He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
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Your flirting powers are incredible.



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#3
This is one of the most physcological pieces I've ever read, you should be happy with it, only one thing I would change is the swearing in the last verse, there are plenty of other words you could use, how about twisted, deranged or even fake? But yeah you should be happy with it, I really like it well done, crit4crit please, see sig. thanks
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#4
thank you
anyone else?
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper