#1
This is a politically driven song. It expresses the way i feel about our president and country. Tell me what you think. This is my first song!


I want to end the precedent
Of hypocrites running politics
Now that the regrettful reign is over
The white house has a different owner
This nations ears will ring
When we say goodbye to our king

We've got a new hope again
A fresh start for Washington
They want to make there children proud
To keep this nation off the ground
Maybe change will come some way
Here on Inaguration Day

Lets close the door on the senate tonight
To end this political gunfight
New Orleans is lost and your to blame
You just sat there and watched them drain
We'll all be happy when your gone
You lost your shoulder to lean on

We've got a new hope again
A fresh start for Washington
They want to make there children proud
To keep this nation off the ground
Maybe change will come some way
Here on Inaguration Day

Then this endless war will stop
Tensions will finally hit the top
This government is not a joke
When was the his oath broke
I know that what he's going to say
You made me act this way

We've got a new hope again
A fresh start for Washington
They want to make there children proud
To keep this nation off the ground
Maybe change will come some way
Here on Inaguration Day
Last edited by famous1234 at Jan 13, 2009,
#2
i'm going to warn you ahead of time to be ready for some harsh words here. People get riled up over politics, especially in a piece as uninformed as this one (there was a little taste for ya).
The good news is you sure will get alot of replies!
#3
Quote by Hesh
i'm going to warn you ahead of time to be ready for some harsh words here. People get riled up over politics, especially in a piece as uninformed as this one (there was a little taste for ya).
The good news is you sure will get alot of replies!


well it just kinda shows that i want change in the government. i feel i am informed enough to form an opionion about the government in my country.
#4
I think one thing that is good is your imagery "New York is burning and your to blame
You just sat there and watch the flames". Really strong imagery. But I think one thing you have to consider when writing the punk song is your the minority so you really (i personally believe) should refrain from sayings such as "we all" becuase we dont "all" if you pick you what i'm laying down.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1045629
#5
it doesn't matter, obamas first day as president will probably end up being his only day as president
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Holy **** that is the single funniest thing I've ever heard, thanks grimguitarist91, hats off to you good sir.