#1
Its basically a song about how the media blow things about my generation out of preportion, kinda ironic song. If you wanna hear the tune its on the riffs and recording section thanks.

Verse 1
Little Jimmy Jonny Jackson
left the school one day
turned around the corner
didnt look the other way
three years later hes still healing
from the wounds he got
but the pill head on the
other side has now forgot

what is going on with the world to day?

Chorus

More knives that the local butcher
More lives than the present future
Take the lead thats heat they're packin'
5 years old and he's bitch smacking

Slip up once the kids will s******
Slip up twice you've pulled the trigger
Three strikes your out double feature
Kids so cruel they killed the teacher

This is what the world's become

Verse 2
Mini Michelle Macenroy
Got onto the bus
Three hoods took out their swiss armys
didnt want a fuss
took all her money
and left her there for dead
now they're living the high life
every day on crystal meth

Chrous
Last edited by Krazy Killian at Jan 13, 2009,
#3
excellent even though it seems anti-drug.
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#4
Its not anti-drug at all lol but I can see that interpretation. Its more a comic view on the medias interpretation of things and i guess the media are anti drug in that sense. A story sells better if it has a substance to blame!
#6
oh i see. it's kind've mocking the way alot of people see drugs and such by showing their point of view. either way still fantastic. i was actually very surprised while i was reading this. Verse 2 was my favorite part.
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#7
How do you mean surprised? I realise that when not read with a tone of irony this can come off as quite an agressive song is that it?
#8
No I was surprised how good it was
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#9
To me, it doesn't sound satirical. It really does sound like you're criticizing the world like the media.

It's a good idea, but you need to work on how it's presented.
#10
Quote by Garb
To me, it doesn't sound satirical. It really does sound like you're criticizing the world like the media.

It's a good idea, but you need to work on how it's presented.


i agree. i understood it after you explained it but it really came of as anti drug. pretty strongly too. maybe you can add a line at the end to show that you're just mocking the media. i think it would be complete if you did this.
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