Ought to be in Riffs & Recordings; you're in the complete wrong place.

For what it's worth, I thought the songwriting was pretty cool, but there was a part which reminded me far too much of a KoRn song (don't ask which one, I have no idea) in that it had the same vocal melody, and personally I think the lead and bass ought to be higher in the mix.
But I thought it was a good song.