#1
Okay so this is my song 'acoustic 1' enhanced and made better by adding piano, ive never recorded with piano before (i dont even play it, i learnt years ago and i remember the notes and through theory i could work out a simple line over the top) so please crit4crit and tell me what you think. link is in my sig.
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#2
nice job. I liked when it picked up with the piano and the guitar about halfway through. I also like the funky chords you had going on at ~2:30, they added a distinct taste to the song. My only suggestion would be to fix the timing between the piano and the guitar. Some chords sounded a bit off of each other, but don't worry, it still sounded great!

if you can, can you comment on my new song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1042792
thanks!
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#3
Guitar at the start was good
Timing was quite off at times
Piano got a little repetitive at the start
Guitar part in the middle where the piano stops was a little too long in my opinion
Nice chords at the end, but the piano should've stayed in
Ending was fine
Pretty good, add a catchy vocal melody and it'll be great
#4
Thanks for the crit, i'll take it into consideration. yeah i was a bit worried about the misalignment of the tracks, ill sort it out when i get time. I want all the crit i can get to make it better and better.
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