#1
I like the way you look at me
I like the way you put your trust in me
I like the way you scream in pain
I like the way you say my name
I like the way you talk on the phone
Or when I’m in your home
You don’t try to resist
You don’t even raise a fist

You know you don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
I like how you pretend
Your whole world is caving in
You pretend that you’re someone else
You don’t even stand up for your self
You blame it on your mental health
Because you think there is not one else


Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist

I like when you push me away
But you know I’m here to stay
When things just don’t go your way
You break down more and more Everyday
You do everything you can to hurt me
But you should know you wanted me
I always keep on coming back
I’m oblivious to your attack

I like when you run from me
But I am the one who will have victory
Therese no way out no way you can win
I’ve got you down and pined
You brought this on yourself
Cause for you Therese no one else
Because you always trick you’re self
Into thinking Therese no one else

Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
#2
Quote by basskid29
I like the way you look at me
I like the way you put your trust in me
I like the way you scream in pain
I like the way you say my name
I like the way you talk on the phone
Or when I’m in your home
You don’t try to resist
You don’t even raise a fist
this feels very repetitive from the get go. its pretty bland. the music would have to be pumping some heavy metal riffs that has the metal/rap sound to even make it work. it still would get repetitive though

You know you don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
I like how you pretend
Your whole world is caving in
You pretend that you’re someone else
You don’t even stand up for your self
You blame it on your mental health
Because you think there is not one else
saying resist and fist again after used in the stanza before gives this stanza a weak start. all i hear is you, you, you, you.... ect. the repetitiveness has already seemed to pass onto the next page cause of the feel you get from the first stanza. the rest of it is okay. nothing great and it doesnt suck.

Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist

repetitive once more

I like when you push me away
But you know I’m here to stay
When things just don’t go your way
You break down more and more Everyday
You do everything you can to hurt me
But you should know you wanted me
I always keep on coming back
I’m oblivious to your attack
if the person doesnt resist than why are they now trying to hurt you when the have seemed to pretty much be on the offensive side where it is pointing out what the person does. it is weird. not contradicting. but strange

I like when you run from me
But I am the one who will have victory
Therese no way out no way you can win
I’ve got you down and pined
You brought this on yourself
Cause for you Therese no one else
Because you always trick you’re self
Into thinking Therese no one else
therese??? its capitalized which makes me think its a noun but it doesnt make sense with the sentence. the beginning of this stanza wasnt even bad either. but then halfway it gets confusing.

Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
You wouldn’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
You don’t even raise a fist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
Don’t resist
i understand this repetitiveness as necessary. but because of a lot of the rest of the song was repetitive it takes away from the effect.




i didnt really like this. it was too repetitive and it would just ruin everything eventually cause it was so repetitive. also the point of this isnt exactly clear. i dont know what you are saying even after i try and decipher it. it still makes little to no sense to me.
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