It's on my profile, it's called " I F@%k Rainbows, Cum Skittles, and Molest Ponys"

dont let the name fool you its not a weird song jsut a weird name
so plz check it out and tell me what you think
woah not bad dude , i like the heavy parts and also the thing at the beginning but i have to say that the slow and the heavy part doent compare as good as they could.

could you just crit my 47seconds long metalcore(?) song?