#1
Hey this is the third song of mine im puttin up here the first two havent gotten very many crits but im hopin third times a charm and ill try to get around to critiquing one of urs if u do the same for mine.
Verse: G-some type of F chord-Em-C
Bridge: Em-C-G-f thing-Em-G-F thing

Ill Still Love You

Verse 1
Wherever you are
Ill be the one who never lets you down
Wherever you are
Ill be waiting
Wherever you go
Theres still love left in this world
Wherever you go
Ill still love you

Instrumental

Verse 2
Whenever you cry
Ill be the one who wipes the tears from your eyes
Whenever you cry
Youll have my shoulder
Whenever your down
Ill put you back on solid ground
Whenever your down
I will be there

Bridge
You Cry
The World Weeps
Seems that theres nothin' left to let us sleep
But then i see you smile

Verse 1
Wherever you are
Ill be the one who never lets you down
Wherever you are
Ill be waiting
Wherever you go
Theres still love left in this world
Wherever you go
Ill still love you

Thanks for reading
#2
You don't think the lyrics are a bit too much like that one song by richard marx?
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#3
I dont know who richard marx is so....and yah the lyrics are pretty generic ther not my most creative but they sound pretty good with music
#4
definitely not the most original lyrics. but i can definitely see this being a nice song with the right instrumentation. (acoustics and whatnot) i think the lyrics serve their purpose and something such as love doesn't always need to hide behind complex metaphors and strange sentence structure. nice, sweet, and to the point. lucky lady you've got there.
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