#2
Pretty good overall, I really like the vocal delay in the verses. I might have bitcrushed or over-compressed the main lead guitar to give it that kinda sleazy industrial feel the drums have. Also, on the quiet bit towards the end, a splash of chorus or a light flange would add some nice swirling texture to the guitar track that might work well. This is all subjective though, good effort!

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