#1
I was gonna make it into a real song but im lazy and i decided i wasnt happy with the intro riff. Shall i make it into a real song? thanks guys CRIT FOR CRIT.

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#2
I like it a lot.
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#3
thanks man can i crit yours?
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#4
I have none...\

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I fail at life yet. I can't shred for ****. My sweeps suck and I cant play fast...
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#5
sounds pretty dope dude
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#6
Hey man, I really dug that. The guitarwork was mostly pretty clean and the layering worked for most of it. I'd love to hear that with some drums. Gotta be honest, there were a few spots where the multiple voices got monotonous, but it always resolved itself in a pretty sick harmony.
#7
Hey man! Crit for crit!

You got yourself some beastly tone there... Perfect for what you're trying to pull off! Your playing was flawless, so all I can crit is the riff itself, really... And it screams for drums under it! Especially after 1:00, when the lead guitar kicks in, it just doesn't work without a decent heavy rhythm under it...

What I'm saying is a compliment, though, because this just NEEDS to be turned into a song! Well done mate!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1048026
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#8
thanks for the crit guys i think im gonna make it into a real song, instead of just an intro and a solo haah. what program do i need to put drums to it? :S
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#10
Sounds cool, try and make your 'chugging' in the background sound a little cleaner/more accurate, it really does make the song sound a lot more polished overall if the simple stuff is perfect. Also try finding a drum program or something like that, not necessary or anything but it makes recordings sound a hell of a lot better.

umm I guess you could comment on my band lol you will probably see what I mean about the chugging as that is basically all we do :P

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1044864
#12
pretty damn cool, if i may suggest something, form 1:03 onwards could really use a good chugging rythmn to it, that way you have a bit more of a guideline to compose your solo over the top

Feel free to crit mine, its in my profile
#13
This is some really good material; Parts of it really reminded me of earlier metallica, I liked it a lot. The layering is really awesome, the harmonies bounce off each other fluently and combine wonderfully with the heavier rhythm playing. Apocalyptic

You could do a lot with this. It needs drums as you obviously have registered, but I think this would work great with some strings as well. Strings can be very metal.

Its builds really nicely and it has great potential. A nifty little recording you have there sir.

If you're up for critting back, this is my work that most suits your style I think. I have others as well
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=955052
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#15
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thanks for the crit guys i think im gonna make it into a real song, instead of just an intro and a solo haah. what program do i need to put drums to it? :S


Make it into a real song, damn it. Just awesome
#17
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Not bad.
Im curious to know though........what did you use to record that?


I used a line6 pod studio UX2 through the podfarm software, its amazing for the money.

And yeah, as regards the chugging thing; im gonna redo the solo rhythm, and make it into a full song. Il probably get it finished within the next couple of weeks. Thanks for the crit guys im stoked you like it
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#18
Pretty darn good man!
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