#1
{acoustic guitar intro}

I'll give up everything to be with you,
Why don't you see,
I'm right in front of you,
Do you not see?

I'm a nobody in your eyes,
But i want to let you know,
That i want to be with you,
And i won't let you go,

I want you so bad,
Is there a problem, is it me?
Be with me and you'll be glad,
That your with me, That you with me <----------- 2nd time fades out

I try to talk to you,
But you don't even notice,
My feelings for you,
So Strong, So Strong. . . .

I would treat you so great,
Do your every wish,
But I never get the chance,
O, but what if,

I want you so bad,
Is there a problem, is it me?
be with me and you'll be glad
That your with me, That you with me <-----------2nd time fades out

{small, soft, acoustic guitar break}

I want you so bad,
Is there a problem, is it me?
be with me and you'll be glad
That your with me, That you with me <-----------2nd time fades out

{acoustic guitar outro}

[whispered] Be with me................... . . . . (<----dont know if i should add that,, need opinions)

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This would be played with a soft acoustic guitar,
(kinda like tears in heaven) but not exactly)

CRitizize me!!!
#2
It's a bit cliche and a bit odd
but it's not bad. I'd use a bit less begging