#1
This is all I have of this so far, and I'm aware that it's pretty bad;

And I cling to the ledges of everything I knew
And I clutch at the life I once lived, but no longer do

And the memories we had
The good and the bad
Seem so far from here
And the life that we shared
The smiles and the tears
Never made anything clear

Chorus:
People say that life is short
But it's the longest thing you'll ever do
It chips away the pieces over time
Until all that's left is you

Needs more.
#4
Quote by MetalMatt93
Well your mum.

You're an idiot.
He's offering you helpful/constructive criticism and you are just rude,
not funny.
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#5
Quote by tona_107
You're an idiot.
He's offering you helpful/constructive criticism and you are just rude,
not funny.


Hardly helpful, and I know it's not funny.
I was being retarded on purpose.
Lrn2joking.
#6
Quote by MetalMatt93
Hardly helpful, and I know it's not funny.
I was being retarded on purpose.
Lrn2joking.

uhh trust me i understood what you were doing, still not funny.
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#7
Quote by MetalMatt93
This is all I have of this so far, and I'm aware that it's pretty bad;

And I cling to the ledges of everything I knew
And I clutch at the life I once lived, but no longer do

And the memories we had
The good and the bad
Seem so far from here
And the life that we shared
The smiles and the tears
Never made anything clear

Chorus:
People say that life is short
But it's the longest thing you'll ever do
It chips away the pieces over time
Until all that's left is you

Needs more.

Did you come up with that line? It is beautiful
Quote by Gabel
You are EXTREMELY WRONG! I have played it. I own an 18W and it would be an awful stereo amp, it's way too bright, breaks up too easily and so on. Secondly, why would a guitar store sell an hifi amp.
#8
I really like those lyrics
Guitars:
-Gibson Les Paul Custom Shop Silverburst (Invader/'59)
-Ovation ApplauseAE44II Elite Black Acoustic


Amps/Cabs
-Peavey 6505+ Head
Orange PPC2x12 Cab Black
-Behringer Ultracoustic ACX450 1x8 Acoustic Combo


Wayyyyy too many effects pedals...
#9
Their just very blatant.
Try some subtlety.
Im not a fan of most metal lyrics anyway though, so I may be biased.

I try to take a certain aspect of a situation and go into depth with it.
Or get metaphorical.
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