#1
I was looking at lyrics for my friend and this doesn't sound right. It doesn't really flow with the rest of the text. But im not really sure how to reword it so could you help me out?

All our memories will never fade
Cause you'll never leave me
You'll always be right here
I can remember our yesterdays
And every word you said to me
Every second that I've been with you
Every minute we had
When I don't all I can wish is for that

Well most of it doesn't flow but I wanna work on the bottom line. Thanks
#2
Well, you could pretty much get rid of the 'When I don't' I dont see how that fits into the song right there.
#3
Perhaps;

Every minute that we had
All I can wish for is you/You are all I can wish for/Life(Living) in my memories of you(with you)
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