#1
Strange conclusions


She always wanted to dye her hair red.
I told her not to do that,
She won’t look good but she was looking
gorgeous...


I was feeding on her perception
That fictional will be reality one day.
I kept ignoring the thought that kept
on screaming...
That’s exactly what happened
Before I left her

Cynic soul pretends to be happy if others
are sad especially someone close.
I was rather confused and furious
Everything was showing discrepancy.
A dam was broken and only one village
was destroyed.

Her blood was coloring her blond hair.
It was kind of ironic,
She always wanted to dye her hair red.
I told her not to do that,
She won’t look good but she was looking
gorgeous as a dead rose.
All calm and relax.
Ready to be a part of practical joke.

The thought was right,
Too much fiction had made me delusional
Hi
#2
Man have I missed you like a bus.

"Everything was showing discrepency" wonderful dry, calculating wit.

The repeaed don't look good/looking gorgeous was very well executed.

I thought the blood hair stanza was clunky and felt a bit more juvenile, writing-wise, than the rest.

But, yeah, I love you're point of view and tone, always makes me chuckle.

Have a good 'un mate.
#6
@Jamie : nice to see you again .This time I'll try to stick around

@#1 synth : Cool I guess

@Confusius: No and thanks

@dud: Why Hayley ? , Why not Julianne Moore?

Thanks for reading
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