#1
I've never actually posted in the R&R forum before, but I want suggestions on a riff that I'm gonna use for some stuff I'm working on.
http://karlsmusic.webs.com/My%20Song%202%20thing.mp3
It's pretty rough because I recorded it before figuring out exactly what I was gonna do but you get the picture.
Should I keep the riff at this tempo or slower? Which would sound better?

... maybe I should record a slower version as an example. Maybe later.
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#3
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faster if anything...

clean it up a bit as well.

I'll try recording a faster version and see if it works. But, yeah, it's pretty rough there. I wasn't completely sure what notes I wanted to hit; I just had the general idea, so I just pressed record and played.
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