#2
This song totally sounded like something Daft Punk might write for a softer sound. The vocals sound really awesome, but when the second vocal track it just sounds awkward for me, maybe you should add in a strong melody, don't really know. That part was the only thing that stood out for me and didn't really like.

Crit me?

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#3
this is nice.
its got a great melody, but i think the drums need to be a little more prominant.
also it seems a bit too heavy on the autotuner when the dual vocals kick in.
other than that, im loving the feel of it, i cant get enough of the 8bit sound at the moment.
big up
--------------------i'm definitely the alphaest male here--------------------
#5
yeah i'm re-doing some stuff in the instrumental track to add more dynamics to the song, and then re-recording the vocals because i'm ocd about them matching up perfectly lol