A couple days!? omg. I think this is a very rushed attempt. You must to practice it slow, in a lower tempo.. and look at your right hand, the main riff must be played with alternate picking. This is a very hard song to play, so.. good luck.
I think you should try playing the piece through in clean. Well try practice it in clean ae, when i was learning this that's what i did and that made things a lot cleaner for when i stuck the Dist. on.
keep at it man

Originally Posted by Outside Octaves
INot calling that form crappy as in a deruagatory term, but that slow lilting blues, that gives off the feeling of just being in the crapper