#1
While reading, please keep close to mind that this song's ment to be some kind of ... bluesy., down-tempo.. style. When the lyrics says (2, 3) it's not a part of the song but my attempt to give you a chance to "read" how the song goes. If it doesn't help you, ignore it.
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Chorous
Yea' giirl
You cut me right open
(2, 3) with that look
that's
in
your eyes
...Don't you know
We can't shake this emotion
(2, 3) Won't you jump the gun with me n' try?

Verse
Giiirl i need to rest no-u-aow
... 'Cause i've had a ****ty night out in toown
Girl I need to think no-u-aow
...My ears are full of yesterday's soundsss

C, Bridge
Put a clean blanket
oon the beed
let your fingers
run through my haair
--
Take your time
to clean this room
I aint ever comin'
back agaain

Chorous
Cause giirl
You cut me right open
(2, 3) with that look
that's
in
your eyes
...Don't you know
We can't shake this emotion
(2, 3) Won't you jump the gun with me n' try?
Quote by zadzior
Sir, Awesome stuff. You have my respect!
Quote by neon-black
aw i love your song! sell it n' it would deffo be a smash!
Quote by veggiederek
this is great. you've got the words!
Quote by kiaraiswicked
... Wauw... It really paints a picture and leaves the rest up to the imagination!
Last edited by TheKermal at Jan 18, 2009,
#2
You cut my right open
typo, me?


im really intruiged to hear how this actually goes.
recording?


(sorry for the lousy comment here)
#3
Quote by ginjaninja
You cut my right open
typo, me?


im really intruiged to hear how this actually goes.
recording?


(sorry for the lousy comment here)

G, thanks for mention it. it was ment to be 'me' and not 'my'
i've though about recording it, but AudaCity won't work anymore for some reason.
it aint picking up any sound.
Quote by zadzior
Sir, Awesome stuff. You have my respect!
Quote by neon-black
aw i love your song! sell it n' it would deffo be a smash!
Quote by veggiederek
this is great. you've got the words!
Quote by kiaraiswicked
... Wauw... It really paints a picture and leaves the rest up to the imagination!