#1
THE BLOB

Verse 1:
He will give you attention
to infect your de-emotional state
left behind beyond redemption
it will help to make you feel the hate
he`l create another fake god
to make you pray for your lord
he`l spit upon your dogma
so you will scream for more

Chorus:
The Blob is gonna get you
raping you from inside
feeding you materialism
now you`l never be satisfied 2X

Verse 2:
does it make you feel good?
did it attached that you`re real?
Materialism in your viens
an abortion is what`s left from your brains
with your head stuffed with pollution
you`l stand with your back against the wall
we`re in his mind prostitution
and he will rape us all

Chorus:
The Blob is gonna get you
raping you from inside
feeding you materialism
now you`l never be satisfied 2X

^it should have a NIN, Marilyn Manson feel within it
comments will be welcome
Last edited by mastaofrocknrol at Jan 18, 2009,
#2
Good work, but it is a little short... you can try to expanding it by:
- making a third verse/bridge
- making a solo/interlude

I like the angry feelings you put in there