#1
I didn`t made it but a friend of mine did it. It was his first lyric so I`m pretty impressed. So remember it`s not mine so be as hard as you can. But please constructive critism. So if you say: 'It sucks' wich part or wich piece? And saying: 'It rocks' would also be more helpfull if you say wich parts.

for the record: I know that it`s not mine so this thread should be closed, but he`s in my band and doesn`t have an account so.

[verse]
All your friends together
Just like the whole room
Dancing, moving, doing
Know that you are living.

[verse]
Like a magician
Stunned by his own tricks.
Standing there, spacin’
On alcohol and medicine

[chorus]
Never, ever stop making.
A morning as short as possible.
For the evening will be
Even more enjoyable.

[verse]
As the evening wears on
a beautiful sight
of the one you like
meets your eye.

[verse]
You buy her a drink
Take a look at her face
While having a chat
You feel her warm embrace

[chorus]
Never, ever stop making.
A morning as short as possible.
For the evening will be
Even more enjoyable.

[bridge]
With your girl next to you
Your going outside
Overcome by the cold
Your brain takes a flight

The stars all gathered
They were shining bright
You still keep wondering
What happened that night.


[chorus]
Never, ever stop making.
A morning as short as possible.
For the evening will be
Even more enjoyable.

C4C!
#2
I'd say the first two verses are pretty good. After that it kinda gets confusing and doesn't seem to go right (maybe I'm just stupid) Pretty good for a first song though.