#2
I Like it. I don't really think that the bass part is neccesary. It sounds like Eric Hutchinson. But yeah the bass is just kind of annoying without any drums. So maybe add in drums or take out the bass.

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#3
I actually liked the bass, but it's alittle loud for me, it takes away from the vocals of the song for me. Maybe make the guitars and vocals louder. If the bass was more subtle and in the back of the other instruments I'd like it better, but maybe you wanted to bass line to come out really strong, can't really say I'd know.

Vocals are really tight too, fits well with the guitar.

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Last edited by Kurt-Corgan at Jan 19, 2009,