#2
really nice, you can get somthing out of that riff, it you make a good intro, how about you repeat the first part one time, and bass and drums comes in, then it goes like that for a few bars, then it stops and you put a verse there with another riff. If continue with that thing I think you could make a killer song, seriously

here my song:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1049225