#2
It was ok. the lead was kind of boring. Maybe add some more overdrive and get a smoother tone or play completely clean. try avoiding playing so many notes that are right next to each other. play with more jumps in intervals and maybe try and clean it up. Nice ideas but just kind of boring.

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