#3
I dunno why, but the beginning reminded me of the portion of Rush's 2112 where the guy finds the guitar and begins to tune it.

Honestly, it got...alright for the last half or so, but the first half is too drawn out, and you've got a ways to go before you start writing things people will praise
#4
I'll say it as you said: "it's a start", it's not awful, but you got make it a bit more structured, I mean, it's a bit too much of a sketch. I like the overall feeling of the song, you got good riff there at the begining, but you really got to work it, and make good song out of it.

here's mine:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1049225
Last edited by Sguit at Jan 19, 2009,
#5
NOt that bad for a first recording.
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#6
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I'll say it as you said: "it's a start", it's not awful, but you got make it a bit more structured, I mean, it's a bit too much of a sketch. I like the overall feeling of the song, you got good riff there at the begining, but you really got to work it, and make good song out of it.

here's mine:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1049225



Yeah, I'm still working on it. I need a drum machine, or find someone in this town who will actually commit to a band. Last one I was in all they wanted to do was play Rock Band >.>