#1
C4C

Radiance In Duality

we light the fires that you begged for that while
your weeping is like that of an infant in the Nile
mourning softly to your heavily burdened chest
as you fall down the river inflaming itself at its best
bringing up the farthest line of dissarray
you ask for a lie, as you heal so slowly in your place

you lost a chance, now lose your way to me
my brightness is radiant in its own duality
lose a life, burn a soul, what all my friends have done
they thought they lost the battle, but its the war that they have won

the plan did not succede now burn it all away
we thew it up into the sea and cut it to a fray
the malfunctions scar the corpse of love
and we hear the laughs of deities above
but now we're gone,we had our fun
but now we have to go up like the sun

you lost a chance, now lose your way to me
my brightness is radiant in its own duality
lose a life, burn a soul, what all my friends have done
they thought they lost the battle, but its the war that they have won

you thought you lost, but you haven't won
you never saw what they hid
the buttons cracked, burned up as one
and now they cry out for a bid
and now we're gone, and lost alone
please dont worry, dont throw a fit
we just have some much needed time

you lost a chance, now lose your way to me
my brightness is radiant in its own duality
lose a life, burn a soul, what all my friends have done
they thought they lost the battle, but its the war that they have won
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it wasn't 7 days, it was 5.

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#2
i hate most of the verses, love the chorus, sorry ryan lol. they feel a little cliche to me, with the couplet rhymes.
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#3
ithought it was prty good. i just dont know if it would flow well. Other wise the metaphors are cool and it has a kicka** concept. chorus is probably my fav. part

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