#2
I think that it sounds good. like it's decent backround music, theres alot of cool overlapping parts. Maybe add in a melody and it would sound really cool. Add in some harmonies and just get more organization for the song and it would sound pretty cool.

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#4
Seeing as it looks like your venturing out into a different type of genre field it wasn't that bad. I loved how you mixed the guitar in the background (even though I'm not in favor of the tone, and don't think a guitar is the instrument for that particular part) but you are a guitarist so its all good, the only thing i can really say that could use some improvement are the creative lead ideas you put over it, some were good some weren't so good, but its all a matter of how well you know the genre, but keep at it, and you'll be a master. C4C?
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