Here's my new band's first song I wrote it...

Crit4Crit (please supply a link!)

Constructive criticism please!
PSN: RokkstarX
Live: RokkyX

All my original (C4C) material is located here.
Sound really solid mate. In fact, I liked it so much, I ****ed with a little. I added drums, and changed up the lead quite a bit, I made the chords during the chorus triads bcause the chorus seemed like it called for chords like that over powerchords.

9/10. Really basic, but really tasty stuff, I loved it. Pretty.

Could you crit strobe-lites and lite-brights? It's my new song, it's in my signature.

Here's the version I messed with if you care to check it out.
Echoes of Silence.zip