#1
On my first day,
You were a foreign object,
Ten long years later,
You’ve been stored away,
But how I wish,
How I wish I never met you,
Your image haunts me,
Still to this day.

And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
To when you were part of the scenery.
And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
Why wont you take me back?

Your hissy fits,
They’re so depressing,
You make me feel like,
I’ve caused you all this harm,
But your moments,
Oh your moments in the spotlight,
It doesn’t take you long,
To raise the alarm.

And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
To when you were part of the scenery.
And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
Why wont you take me back?

Are you 2 years ago?
Are you 2 years ago?
Are you 2 years ago?
Are you 2 years ago?

And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
To when you were part of the scenery.
And I want you to take me back,
To a time when life was a one way track,
Why wont you take me back?

But how I wish,
How I wish I never met you,
Why wont you take me back?
I'm here to help

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ok, as usual pit is being very unhelpful except andychalmers, so im gonna go post this someplace else


And a master of storytelling...

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andychalmers102, that story is awesome.
#2
i like how in the verses you've got
"But how I wish,
How I wish I never met you,"
Kind of parrallel structure, but i just want to warn you that those phrases are a little chiched, something ive been told to avoid whenever i write
#3
I like it
Guitars:
-Gibson Les Paul Custom Shop Silverburst (Invader/'59)
-Fender Standard Telecaster HH Black (SH-5/'59)
-Fender Standard Stratocaster HH White (Nazgul/'59)
-Austin Guitars Les Paul Goldtop Copy (Distortion/'59)
-Ovation ApplauseAE44II Elite Black Acoustic


Amps/Cabs
-Peavey 6505+
-Peavey Stereo Chorus 2x12 Combo
-Behringer Ultracoustic ACX450 1x8 Acoustic Combo
-Marshall MX2x12 Cabinet


Wayyyyy too many effects pedals...