#1
This is my first song so go easy on me

Verse:
You make up your own rules
But you are the true fools
You're not the queen of England
nor the president of Finland

We play no games
You'll go down in flames
See ya in h*ll
after rocking the world farewell

Chorus:
You think you're superior
And we're your inferior
You're an animal in a cage
2x

Verse:
You hide in your office
Abusing your profits
Banana and wage
Like a monkey in it's cage

You treat us like h*ll
we are humans as well
And your so called salvation
Codename: Annihilation

Chorus:
You think you're superior
And we're your inferior
You're an animal in a cage
2x

Banana as wage
Like a monkey in it's cage
You're an animal in a cage
2x

You're an animal in a cage
4x


You can teach anyone to play fast, but you gotta have soul.
-Zakk Wylde


My set:
Gibson SG Faded Cherry
Peavy Rage 158
Boss DS-1 Distortion
#4
Very good for a first attempt at writing you have a lot of potential, but as someone else said the rhyming was very forced but everyone does this in their first couple attempts if you dont mind criting mine the links in the sig