#1
I just wrote this song. It took me about 15 minutes to write. Tell me if I have to fix anything. Thanks.

take it to the ocean
the waves are comfortably smooth
the ships boards thunder
and begin to move
the paddle made of wood
an ore made of steel
take your pick and select which
which one you think is real

well they're all real
another deal
another feel
well the're all real
another meal
another kneel

feeling seasick
just too much shakin
you throw it up
and i know you're not fakin
get on your knees
the ships about to blow
creeping up to the top
a fire down below

well they're all real
another deal
another feel
well they're all real
another meal
another kneel

and now it comes
just over again
all over the deck
keeps coming in floods
and now it is wet
fire a blank check
When I buy my wife, at first she cook good, her vagine worked well, she strong on plow, but three years later when she was fifteen, she receive hair on her chest, her voice become deep, "BORAT, BORAT", and her vagine hang like sleeve of wizard
#2
It's terrible, dude, what were u thinking, i mean its funny if thats what you were going for, then 10/10 but if you were going for something else 2/10 for the rhyme scheme. sorry man, not trying to be a dick.