#1
I'm not really sure what genre this falls under. I did all of this in Sonar 6 and like what I have so far. Everything is synth except for the vocals, guitar, and bass. Just looking for some feedback on what I've got so far and what I could do to make it better.

http://www.myspace.com/chestnutferry (should be the third song in the player)

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#2
but... theres no guitar in the song...

like 5 seconds there is...
Last edited by Ozwal at Jan 21, 2009,
#3
The beat and the rhythem are both great. I love the drum beat under the synth and the guitar interlude fits it all perfectly.

If I had to say anything, I'd suggest rethinking some of the vocals or how theyre presented. I get that its supposed to sound like its so calm and it works really well with the music and the tempo of the lyrics are great, but they're hard to listen to if you dont change up the notes a little. Id suggest jumping an octave every once in a while to add intensity and differentiate between the vocals and the music.

Overall its a great song and I really like the guitar and the beat, good stuff man.

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