I would take off that weird video effect, it's quite annoying. Other than that, it was quite sloppy, and if I were you I would practice until you have it perfect before you post a vid, but still, it looked like you enjoyed it. I would probably look into getting like a multieffects processor or some pedals, because your tone was kinda off. Crit for Crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1050165
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Quote by pettah93
take away that video flapping thing:P and a tips is to take away the distortion in the verse, and try to practise a little more before u record, anyways it was quite good, c4c?

Has he followed through on the crit for crit for you? Just wondering if he didn't see mine or something
I'm Luke.