#1
Open your eyes, don't show mis-conception,
Keep those eyes wide, to reveal the deception,
Let it all out, and release all this tension,
And listen to me, can I have your attention,

I need you to wake, and stop living this dream,
Stop falling away, and start crawling to me,
This love is just vicious, but we're meant to be,
I love you with passion, but i'm on my knees,

Render me in-effective, just toss me aside,
It's better than waiting, to see where I reside,
You lay out your rules, and by these I abide,
Bury me at the beach, and I'll wait for the tide.


Quote by Våd Hamster
Find a dice and assign a number to each girl. Throw the dice.


The number you hope for at the moment you throw the dice, is the one you'll want to keep.
#3
It's very symetrical and there's a lot of rhyming. Good rhyming but that is a little excessive.
Let's not bicker and argue about who killed who...
Quote by Necrophagist777
I'm ORION, LORD OF EVIL, give me your soul and breathe in my darkness.

YOU WILL NOT ENJOY THIS......
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