#1
These are my first 2 songs Ive written/recorded so any advice you have would be greatly appretiated!! If you want me to crit your stuff lemme know!
Thanks,

ps, im not good at naming songs so dont make fun lol. And Saltydogs is pretty much a wank job I usually try to be more tasteful. The song volume is low but its there. Thanks!!
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Fender Aerodyne Stratocaster
NOS Tweed Fender Blues Jr
Boss BD-2
Boss CE-5
Boss CS-3
Dunlop Slash Crybaby
Korg DT-10
Boss BR-600
MXR Script Phase 90
MXR DD-7 Analog Delay

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Vox V847
#2
saltydog = sorry, not good
softserve moonbeams = good potential. I really like the rhythm in the background, but you need to work on your leads over top. some scales sounded out of place, and it almost sounds like you are trying a little to hard...try and simplify it a bit cuz that one has definate potential to be a cool track

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EHX Metal Muff
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#3
cool thanks, yeah the heavier one is basically a wank job, not tasteful at all. And I get the trying to hard alot lol im trying to work on it.
My Gear:

Fender Aerodyne Stratocaster
NOS Tweed Fender Blues Jr
Boss BD-2
Boss CE-5
Boss CS-3
Dunlop Slash Crybaby
Korg DT-10
Boss BR-600
MXR Script Phase 90
MXR DD-7 Analog Delay

GASing for:
Vox V847
Last edited by MOOSE_CCR99 at Jan 22, 2009,
#4
thats cool man, props on your first pieces though
like I said, simplify the leads over the second track and you have a winner!

Epi Les Paul Std w/Duncans
ESP LTD EX260
Cry Baby From Hell
Marshall JH-1
EHX Metal Muff
MXR EVH Phase 90
Carl Martin Classic Chorus
EHX #1 Echo
Ibanez LU-20
Dunlop DCB-10
Crate V50112
Tascam US144


PEDALBOARD JUNKIES