#1
Once, I was a nervous boy
I played around, nothing could stop me
I met you, and nothing could fill my life…
But you

I grew older, slightly wiser,
But you, were always ahead of me.
I met other girls, but they weren’t enough…
For me

Once you were my friend,
But we were always apart.
Never, could I venture further.
Until now…
Until Now…

I grew older, but never wiser.
Except for one thing: I could,
See that there was no hope,
For us...

Then, I went to high school,
I saw you there, still no hope.
I found another, to try and
Fill my heart, but no.

Once you were my friend,
But we were always apart.
Never, could I venture further.
Until now…
Until now…

You, split up with him,
I saw that ray of light,
In the tunnel of being single
You’re my light

You took my hand,
You were my girl.
Now your confused,
I think your gone
For now…

Once you were my friend,
But we were always apart.
Never, could I venture further.
Until now…
Until now…

Then, you were my friend,
Yesterday, I could call you more.
Now, you are just a friend,
And I will wait for you forever more
Forever…more.
#3
Alright, I am not going to do a verse by verse break down of this because I feel that it would detract from the song. This song is meant to be viewed from an emotional stand point I feel and is very powerful in this respect.

Upon finishing this you left nothing to imagination and really managed to convey the message of your tale. Their was pain, longing, hope, love, but most of all loyalty. Overall I would say that this is one of the finer pieces I have read in long time. Top marks on all of it. Your verses flow well and you manage not to be cliched which happens all too often with songs dealing with topics such as this.

I am pleased to say that you have real talent old boy. I encourage you to keep writing and posting and look forward to seeing more of your work if you are so inclined feel free to read any of my little writings. No obligation though.

Once again this is an awesome song (or poem) you really did an amazing job. Keep the music alive brother.