#1
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Hey check out me and my friends little project. Constructive Criticism would be very appreciated! I will definatly crit 4 crit. We put about 2 day in recording, arranging and mixing these. All of it is spontaneous jamming. First takes only! Please and thanks!
Last edited by Burn Out at Jan 23, 2009,
#2
couldn't help but think that the beginning of your 1st song should have sounded like this:
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=9AvUeoH81ZI.
as to the music you got some good ideas that would benefit from a better sound and some rehearsal. first takes are not usually a good idea unless you're a really proficient musician, and even then... I would like to see your tunes redone with a lot more care and patience.
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