#1
Well this is something different to what I'd normally write.
This song has more chords than actual notes and that's different for me.

Anyway, I'd love to get some criticism. Good or bad

Crit For Crit as always! Just leave a link to yours.

Thank you.
Attachments:
Casting Lights.zip
Your light bulb knows everything you do in your room.
#3
I agree with it being to slow.
I sped it up to around 150 and listened.

It reminds me a bit of Fightstar, which is very cool.

The riffs are all pretty good, I especially liked the one at bar 19.

The snare-roll at bar 80 was weird, even at the original tempo, well it might have been the fact the kick was doing the 2nd and 4th note of each beat, instead of the 1st and 3rd which would be expected.
All the guitars and such were good there, but the snare/kick like, I'm not sure. It just didn't sound right. Maybe have something like, some kind of marching snare-roll thing in there? That might be quite interesting.

Overall, 8/10. Very nice, just needs touching up a bit.
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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1053227
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Last edited by Carl6661 at Jan 24, 2009,