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I've been writing this song since Friday, and now that it's done I'd like some outside opinions on it:

Brain Fog

I'll be the king one day,
Then you'll see the mistakes I've made.
I'll write it down in black and blue,
The traps I'll lay will ensnare food.
Everything I've ever said,
Will be considered when I'm dead.
This blue dream will be obscene,
Three hours before midnight.

In my cave,
It's alright.
I'll hide under,
fog of night.
In my cave,
I'm not lazy.
Everything,
is just a little hazy.

When I am king,
I'll court the world.
You'll hear my voice,
But not my words.
Everything,
Will be a little worse.
It's for the best,
And it might not hurt.
I'll tell you,
What you want to hear.
Everything will be alright my dear.
Empty promises full of hope.
Cracks in eyes,
Mirrors and ciggerette smoke.

In my cave,
It's alright.
I'll hide under,
fog of night.
In my cave,
I'm not lazy.
Everything,
is just a little hazy.

In my cave,
It's alright.
I'll hide under,
fog of night.
In my cave,
I'm not lazy.
Everything,
is just a little hazy.
Gear:
Ibanez Jet King III
Marlin Sidewinder
Behringer El Toro Electric
(cheap) Acoustic Guitar.
Blue G4M Bass Guitar.
G4M Bass Amp.
Behringer GM108 Guitar Amp
A sense of humour