#1
the way that the sun shined, today
reminded me of you
so i painted a picture today
and painted it for you
and all the things you used to say
they melted my heart right away

your smile swept me off my feet
oh lord my heart just skipped a beat
those bright blue eyes i can deny
the way they sparkle and they shine
my only problem is your hair
so perfect nothing else compares

Id start with yellow for the fallen leaves
that laid beneath our feet
a hint of gold for the autumn sun
our secrets it will keep
a bit of brown for that river sand
i miss between my toes
add some bronze to that head of yours
and make this picture glow

ill wrap it up and send it to you tomorrow
and hopefully youll understand
your face is the first one i want to see each morning
ill never leave you, take my hand


not really done yet,
just wondering if i was wasting my time?
#2
Well....this is just my opinion, but I hate songs about how people fall in love.....that's just my opinion.

But this is pretty good.

like the part
"a bit of brown for that river sand
i miss between my toes
add some bronze to that head of yours
and make this picture glow"

is awesome.