Mr Benson (Concept)

I’m working on a tune in the style of George Benson (and Wes Montgomery) and I just wanted some opinions on the basic ideas I’ve got so far. Any opinions and/or suggestions would be welcome, I’d like to turn this into quite a decent song if I can - possibly a composition for my A-Level music course.

The song is called Mr Benson and it’s in my profile. C4C as per usual.