#1
[chorus]
You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
Your all I see, when i fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

[verse]
That first day I met you, i was captivated,
From your very look, to your every sound,
When you first kissed me, I was sent to heaven,
I knew my life had just begun

[chorus]
Ya, You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
Your all I see, when i fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

[verse 2]
Do you remember, that night together,
hudled close, I could feel your every breath,
And when you told me, just how much you loved me,
I just wished that night would never end

[chorus]
Ya, You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
Your all I see, when i fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

[bridge]
and i need you here by me,
and I need you to see, how much you mean to me,
now before you go, just give me one chance,
so I can be, the man you need me to be

[chorus]
Because, You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
Your all I see, when i fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

ya your all i see, when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel, of, my, dreams


Just a little acoustic song im writing for my girlfriend, c4c tell me what you think and If you have an opinion as to what chord progression i should use as I can't quite decide
I don't know just where I've been, who I am or what I've seen, I just know somethings happened to me, cause I've lost touch with my memory
Last edited by darknes40 at Jan 27, 2009,
#2
the chorus is kinda like that kids song "you are my sunshine", you might wanna alter that a bit
other than that its good
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#3
aww! That's a sweet song!
Your girlfriend should be very proud and happy!
It's very heartfelt and poignant, and as long as the guitar, i feel, is slow, and perhaps fingerpicked, this would make an excellent song! Well done!
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#4
Quote by brucehead
the chorus is kinda like that kids song "you are my sunshine", you might wanna alter that a bit
other than that its good

Ya I was kinda tryin to have it semi resemble it so it like sparks that little thing in the back of ur mind when you hear/read it
I don't know just where I've been, who I am or what I've seen, I just know somethings happened to me, cause I've lost touch with my memory